Trains in Poorly Written Fiction

Euphod

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I'll go first:

"The Crossing"

The lights were already red when I reached the crossing. I was first in line; a triumph of a late night commute.
The gates were down, clicking and blinking at me while I turned the ignition off.
The engine ponderously entered the crossing, it's headlamp blazing like a headlamp on an engine.
The locomotive may have been moving at 10MPH, but it was hard to tell, as I was sitting in my car.
The rails squealed and banged as each car moved in front of me from left to right.
I could see the headlights from the cars driven by other people on the other side of the tracks, but only between each rail car as they passed.
Wink, the headlights shown, blink, they disappeared, wink, blink for what had to be 20 minutes.
I was late for work. My head ached, and my wife and my girlfriend met at my son's soccer game today....
The train finally finished crossing and I started my car again, since I already had started it earlier, but then turned it off.
The gate began to rise, but then stopped and came back down again. The lights continued to blink as the headlamps from those other cars stared into my retinas.
There must be another train coming on the other track, I thought. I turned off my ignition again.
I got out of my car and contemplated placing my ear on the rails to see if I could tell how far away the train was........
 
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Doesn't sound like poorly written fiction, sounds more like Trainz Reality.
I like it.
Too bad Euphod's thinking of leaving, I thought his other topic looked like a well done railroad police sting operation. Caught a few of the people who shouldn't be here in it.
 
Let me try!

I wake up late! Oh, No! I am late for work.:eek:
I travel in my car as fast as the law allows.
I zip up to a crossing. Oh bloody hell there is a CSX switcher moving slowly across the tracks with about 15 cars.
Now What?!? It stops and backs up!
Now what it doing! It stops again!
I have to go to the bathroom. :confused:
THIS IS A NIGHTMARE!:(

I wake up.:hehe:
 
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"Look yonder comin'
comin' on down the line
It's the Orange Blossom Special
Rollin' down that Seaboard Line"

Courtesy of Johnny Cash

Cheers

AJ
 
Mental Wounds Not healing,
Life's a Bitter Shame
I'm Going Off the rails on a Crazy Train!
I'm Going Off the rails on a Crazy Train!

2c from me!
Sean
 
I'm not sure I know how to write badly, but I'll take a shot at it. This sounds like fun.

I stopped at the crossing as the gates came down and the lights flashed like flashing lights. Also, the bells were ringing like ringing bells.
I could hear the train before I saw it, like something you hear before you see.
Finally, I saw it as well as heard it.
A Southern Pacific 0-6-0 switcher pulling a string of double-stack CSX well cars.
I thought, That's not right. Someone put the tender down backwards behind that loco.
 
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