Okay hert, gird your loins, cause I'm going to unleash some brutal constructive criticism here!
First off, it can't be easy trying to make a silk purse out of a sow's ear, but you are definitely giving it a good go! The issue I have is not with your work, but rather with the general route itself. The screens you show are great, until I spot one of those impossibly tall, pointed spires in the background. It seems you are at odds with the route itself! While I am not a stickler for prototypical anything, I do have to say that the topography is important. Our friend Dragonharh has struggled with respectability here, I've observed his offerings for a long time. He is coming along nicely in his modeling, but this route is rather old, is it not? My guess is he made the route awhile ago, and didn't bat an eye at the Pokemon landscape. Not that I'm trying to drive a wedge between you two, I admire how he has pushed on past the criticism and continued to grow as a creator, but this is a chance to really transform this route into something that people will actually want to drive, and no amount of grass and flowers is going to hide those awful landforms.
I see the basis here for a fine route, but in my opinion the two of you should have a discussion about toning down the awkward, jagged peaks.
Other than that, press on and keep fighting the good fight.