New Commuter Train (Huge Screens)

[dragonharh]

Comming To Dragons Pass V4.0 The All New DPR Commuter Train Set. I had this planed for a bit now and been working on the details on the cars. Here the Set being pulled by The Steamer and F7 units.

DPR Baggage Car

DPR Coach

DPR Dinner

DPR Observation

 

[PJAMA]

Nice Work!

I have criticisms though.

• The rolling stock & passenger cars are too boxy; What program are you using to model them?
• The color scheme for the railroad is too blande. I suggest using 3-4 colors instead of just MS Paint Blue & White.
• Anti-Alias the Logo of your Railroad
• The trains you are using are not commuter trains, They're long-distance travel trains. Try reskinning a MNRR Shoreliner III Cab and P32/F40PH.
• Your route is lacking A LOT of scenery. Try adding groups of trees and Jankovis' Grass. Example Here:

I'm not trying to be mean or anything, this is just advice you can use. Okay?

 

[dragonharh]

thanks for the idvise Pjama I'm stell working on the route I haven't got to that part yeat. I added more scents The last time seen here:
http://forums.auran.com/trainz/showthread.php?82610-Dragons-Pass-V4-0 I'm detailing my map alot in DPV4 Phase 2.

 

[iceman2117]

@Pjama
Your Landscape/Nature Pic looks Cartoon.
The Trees are very strechting. Looks a little bit surreal.

g'ice